Today is the day everyone celebrated New Years. Cherie was swimming in the pool while her family was inside the house cooking and chatting. Suddenly, her house exploded with the sounds of screaming then silence. Cherie was aghast while she looked at her house that was completely annihilated. The only thing she could see of her house was a wall , however, was later engulfed by a flame. She then saw blue and white sirens coming toward her the was the last thing she saw before she fainted. She thought to herself, while sleeping, ” What’s going to happen to me tomorrow?”
Good job. I liked how you moved from a calm setting to the house setting on fire. Your story was interesting.
Good job Ruby! Your story was really interesting. I really hope you continue your story.